Wednesday, October 6, 2010

Blackhawks!

I was very pleased with this article for the most part, it was written by Chris Kuc, on the topic of the Blackhawks ability to win a consecutive Stanely Cup. It was a crazy experience as a Chicago sports fan to witness the Stanley cup win last year and what could be more exciting than winning two years in a row. Kuc brings up great points about the multiple roadblocks standing in the way of the Hawks winning the championship again, such as salary cap and injuries. Kuc includes quotes but did have trouble with his quote punctuation towards the end of the piece, when quoting Dan Bylsma. Kuc started with a strong topic lead, and ended with a quote from a returning Hawks player, both good strategies. As a reader and fan, I enjoyed the article because it reminded me that the season is just around the corner, and even with definite adversity, the team has the desire to win, again.

"Cap makes cup repeat extra difficult" Article

2 comments:

  1. I couldn't see trouble with quotes in the article. What do you mean?

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  2. I think he forgot a set of quotations towards the end! Thanks for the tips about the run-on's. I will definitely work on that!

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